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Post by Jabo on Dec 12, 2006 15:56:39 GMT -5
((*silly slaps her* NO! It's not about Melissa saying one or two more sentences. How does she feel about the whole situation? What did she think when Jabo yelled at her? And what about when Mavrick destroyed everything around him with his aura? Besides, she already got the answer. Between Tomb and Tyalla they explained almost everything. And when Mavrick appeared he also explained many things, so Melissa shouldn't even need to ask, for they explained everything that has been going on. Just read the posts. You can ignore the fight between Hayashi and Tomb because it is only a fight (Although I think it was great and very well described), but you should read the other things. If after reading that you still think Melissa can just 'ignore' everything that happened, then it's okay, but at least explain for example why she didn't care. You aren't RPing a robot!!! >< Melissa has feelings, describe them. I thank you for trying to go fast, but this part of the plot is very important. Just work on it a little. Besides, Mavrick and you are the only ones left here, no one else is there. And if you had read my post you would see that Jabo requested something to Melissa before disappearing. I won't feel bad if you then say that she 'ignored them' (oh well, she ignored a guy dying, a girl fainting, the appearance of an evil dude, the destruction of a great part of the forest... quite hard to ignore all that, to tell the truth <.<). It's just that now I am the one who feels ignored, like if our posts didn't matter. EDIT: Oh yeah also, Zero and Koutetsu asked you to take the pictures out from your signature because they are too large. Actually I can't see nothing It looks like your signature is just empty! I guess it's a fail from my comp... will try to fix it.))
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Mavrick
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Dont be afraid of the dark.... be afraid of what it hides.
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Post by Mavrick on Dec 12, 2006 22:16:50 GMT -5
((Muahahahaha!!!!! Melissa you dont ignore everything expetialy when i just attacked you i mean i just walked up and attepted to stab you! you dont ask a question at that you get the hell out of the way! i mean come on (oh by the way Jabo i cant wait to fight you :-) same for you hayashi) well anyways im not trying to be mean (Trying?) or anything but thats just whats on my mind i mean im the bag guy here thats trying to kill everyone!))
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melissa
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i am too innoncent to die
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Post by melissa on Dec 13, 2006 13:50:03 GMT -5
((give me a break ppl i am groundded and i sneeaking on this computer its hard and i will try to fix within and hour i have to...))
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Post by Jabo on Dec 13, 2006 15:10:04 GMT -5
((As I said, take your time. We're not in a hurry))
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melissa
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i am too innoncent to die
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Post by melissa on Dec 13, 2006 16:03:26 GMT -5
((thanks can someone give me the 411 on wats happening in this forum of mine i don't have time to read it all....))
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Post by Jabo on Dec 14, 2006 18:54:30 GMT -5
Summary: -Melissa is sitting in the forest wondering about her origins, true race etc. -Jabo is exploring the zone in search of a strange source of energy he has felt (surely Mavrick) -Hayashi, thinking he's alone, plays his ocarina. -Jabo notices the amazone is not paying attention to him so he goes take a look and listens to Hayashi's great melodies. -After the concert, Hayashi disappears misteriously as Melissa walks towards the knight and asks him what he's doing in her domain. -Jabo has no time to answer, for he hears a girl screaming for help and he goes to stop the thugs that are trying to catch her. -Although he stops one, Jabo lets Hayashi take care of the rest, but one of them, Tomb, is not just a middle thug. -A fight between the elf and the thug starts after said thug burns a great quantity of trees around them, provoking Hayashi's anger. -The fight ends when Kim, the girl who was being chased, changes to Tyalla, her other personality. -Tomb explains that he was chasing Kim without knowing she was Tyalla as well, for he was trying to capture rogue experiments for his master, Mavrick. -Tomb is about to leave, but Jabo is stubborn and keeps him in a cage made with magic. -When he's about to arrest Tyalla as well when she charges at Jabo, Tomb stops her, and admits that he wants to be arrested rather than returning with Mavrick. -Hayashi is angered by Tomb's carelessness and is about to kill him, but Jabo is able to calm him down. -Hayashi leaves as Tomb explains that Kim is very important for Mavrick's plans. He tries to redeem himself and apologizes. Tomb confesses that he doesn't work for Mavrick for pleasure, but to get some important item from him. -Mavrick was spying all the time, being able to hide from everyone's senses. He reveals that Tomb was a Holy Knight before he turned him into a deformed monster with his experiments, after having killed Tomb. -Kim faints after returning to her normal self, witnessing Tomb's death. We don't know yet if Tyalla is still with Mavrick or if Tomb's death made her switch sides. -Melissa asks again what happened, getting angry as her tiger servant appears. -Mavrick tries to intimidate Melissa with his own energy, unimpressed by the amazone's power. -Jabo desperately tries to save Tomb's life, knowing that he had tried to redeem himself, even although he knows the unfortunate monster is already dead, but everything is in vain. -Jabo, crying and with his heart about to burst in anger, challenges Mavrick. He was too shocked by Tomb's brutal death to pay attention to his duel with Melissa. -Jabo is angered, not only by Mavrick's cruelty, but by Melissa's selfishness ignoring Tomb's horrible death and her servant's coolness. -Jabo wants to fight against Mavrick to avenge Tomb, but he's being called at the Castle. Before being teleported, and even at risk of his own life, he takes Tomb's corpse and Kim with him, leaving Mavrick and Melissa alone again. Before disappearing, Jabo swears he will make Mavrick pay for his sins and he warns Melissa to not fight against Mavrick, for he wants to take his revenge himself and Melissa alone is not powerful enough to defeat him. -Mavrick is about to kill Jabo knowing that he's about to disappear, but he doesn't attack in time to kill him. Then he calls three of his creatures, horrible monsters with almost human shapes, and tells them to bring Kim back to him and kill Jabo for daring to challenge him. -Mavrick puts his attention on Melissa once more and challenges her to a fight, summoning his sword. -Hayashi feels the destruction that has taken place in the scenario, the death of many trees because of Melissa and Mavrick trying to impress each other and Jabo's anguish because of Tomb's death, so he turns around and internally swears to avenge all the beings that have been killed by Mavrick and Melissa. He's not there yet, though.
From Mavrick's last post on, I think you should delete your IC messages and post accordingly with the situation. Also, read Zero's post in your profile for he said there are things that need to be fixed.
If there's anything wrong, Hayashi, Mavrick, please correct me.
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melissa
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i am too innoncent to die
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Post by melissa on Dec 18, 2006 17:14:08 GMT -5
((oh wow ummm okay now i can start)) melissa looks at maverick, ~okay you want a fight then bring it on sweetie.~ melissa replies ernestly.
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Mavrick
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Dont be afraid of the dark.... be afraid of what it hides.
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Post by Mavrick on Dec 18, 2006 18:40:11 GMT -5
Mavrick looked at the girl and smiled showing a little teeth "you dont know what you have goten yourself into little girl" Mavrick said charging the girl full on attempting a cross slash to her mid section.
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melissa
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i am too innoncent to die
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Post by melissa on Dec 22, 2006 16:02:46 GMT -5
~little? Girl? oh no you didn't hon',~ melissa replied doing a back flip and threw two daggers at him.
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Mavrick
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Dont be afraid of the dark.... be afraid of what it hides.
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Post by Mavrick on Dec 27, 2006 18:40:37 GMT -5
Mavrick saw the girl dodge his attack but it didnt hinder him he wanted to play with his new target as much as posible. Mavrick saw her backflip and charged again but befor he could swing two daggers came flying at him. "daggers...." Mavrick said bringing his left hand up and catching them both betwine his fingers. Mavrick looked at the daggers for a split second then pulled his hand back and threw them back at her at incredable speed. Mavrick jolted forward behind the daggers to attempt to jump over them and slash horizontaly with great force at the girl if she tryed to dodge the daggers.
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